March 31st

Showed my brochure to Lee today and received some very good feedback towards my project which I then proceeded to make some important changes towards the layout of the brochure.  The main thing that changes was removing the circles with photographs and enlarging the main illustration, this while creating more negative space on the page also gave the image a more concentration and was no longer too busy,  changes were also made to the map page in order to remove lines but also add more to it.

And last but not least the map and cover's text were changes so the theme was more obvious to the audience.